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The Origin of ‘Pigeon-Blood Red’ and The Structure of the Novel : by Ed Duncan

I decided on waiting to publish author Ed Duncan’s guest post, until his debut novel ‘Pigeon-Blood Red’, had made its way to the top of my TBR pile and I was almost ready to begin reading.

I am so pleased that I took that decision, as this excellent article is so interesting and intrinsically linked to the storyline and characters, that it makes an almost essential prelude to the story and a relevant connection between book and author.

Hi! This Is Me – ED DUNCAN

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Originally from Gary, Indiana, I now live outside Cleveland.

I am a graduate of Oberlin College and Northwestern University Law School. For more than 37 years, I was a partner and practicing trial lawyer, with a national law firm in Cleveland, Ohio. In addition to an occasional trial, I wrote reams of briefs and opinion letters. I specialized in something called “insurance coverage,” which in general meant it was my job to evaluate whether or not a particular accident or loss was, or was not, covered by an insurance policy. In 2008 I wrote an original, highly regarded legal treatise, called “Ohio Insurance Coverage,” but I didn’t count that text as fulfilling my quest to become a published author, since it isn’t fiction, and what I really wanted to do was to write fiction, especially crime fiction.

It’s always been said that you should write what you know. I may not have been on the run from an underworld hitman, but I do know law and I’m excited to be able to use that knowledge creatively as well as professionally.

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I am currently at work on the second installment in the trilogy that began with …

PIGEON – BLOOD RED

For underworld enforcer Richard “Rico” Sanders, it seemed like an ordinary job. Retrieve his gangster boss’s priceless pigeon-blood red ruby necklace and teach the double-dealing cheat who stole it a lesson. A job like a hundred before it. But the chase quickly goes sideways and takes Rico from the mean streets of Chicago to sunny Honolulu, where the hardened hit man finds himself in uncharted territory when a couple of innocent bystanders are accidentally embroiled in the crime.

As Rico pursues his new targets, the hunter and his prey develop an unlikely respect for one another and Rico is faced with a momentous decision: follow his orders to kill the couple whose courage and character have won his admiration, or refuse and endanger the life of the woman he loves?

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THE ORIGIN OF ‘PIGEON-BLOOD RED’ and THE STRUCTURE OF THE NOVEL

Years ago, I read a novel by Dashiell Hammett that was part of a collection of all of his novels.  It was called The Maltese Falcon.  By now I suspect that most people have seen the 1941 movie of the same name starring Humphrey Bogart as the iconic private eye, Sam Spade.  For trivia fans, that was the third (and best) movie adaptation of the novel.  One of several reasons it was so good is that first time director John Huston took much of the riveting dialogue verbatim from the novel.

 

As I read the novel, I don’t think I realized how much of an effect it had on me.  At least since high school I had wanted to write fiction, but by the time I read The Maltese Falcon, I had been a practicing lawyer for several years.  As an aside, a popular expression, the author of which I don’t recall, is that “inside every lawyer is a writer trying to get out”.  What stirred the writer in me to break free was Hammett’s masterpiece, although it had a delayed effect.  In that novel, the search for the bejeweled Maltese falcon consumed the roguish gallery of characters that populated the story.  In my novel it is the search for a pigeon-blood red ruby necklace worth millions that drives the action.  I think I subconsciously substituted the ruby necklace for the falcon as my novel took hold in my mind.

 

Of course, the Maltese falcon had both a mysterious origin and a tortuous history that was the stuff of legends.  Readers of my novel will learn that the pigeon-blood red ruby necklace that sets in motion all of the conniving and murders also has a somewhat mysterious origin as well as a tortuous history.  The phrase “pigeon-blood red” itself has an ancient origin.  The phrase was coined by Indian gem dealers centuries ago.  It describes the color of the most valuable rubies in the world, which originate in Burma or Myanmar.  That color is said to replicate the hue of the first two drops of blood that trickle from the nostrils of a freshly killed pigeon.  At auction, pigeon-blood red rubies have fetched over $1 million per carat, and a single ruby has sold for over $28 million, which probably matches or exceeds the value of the famed Maltese falcon.

 

The idea for the novel first came to me when I was attending a legal seminar in Honolulu.  The kernel of an idea that blossomed into the fully formed novel was barely a thought that came to me as a question:  what if a lawyer on holiday in Honolulu had a chance encounter with a mysterious woman who was running for her life from some dangerous people and what if the lawyer tried to help her?  That premise became Pigeon-Blood Red and the source of the danger became a pigeon-blood red ruby necklace in her possession.  Although, in retrospect, the final title of the novel seems obvious, the title I initially settled on was Murder in Paradise.

 

Finally, a word about the structure of the novel.  The main character was always meant to be the lawyer who comes to the aid of the “damsel in distress.”  After all, I’m a lawyer and the one in the novel is a highly idealized version of me.  Therefore, as originally written, the novel begins with the lawyer receiving a verdict in a case he has just tried.  Shortly thereafter something dramatic happens to him.  In the finished version, the lawyer doesn’t appear until the second half of the novel.  There are two reasons.

 

First, the lawyer’s story, while compelling, is not as compelling as the story surrounding the underworld enforcer hunting down the thief who stole the necklace.  Agents and publishers want crime fiction to begin with a bang.  Most of them don’t have the patience to allow a story to unwind slowly from the opening page.  Sad but true.  The disappearance of the necklace and the fevered search to get it back provided a bigger bang. Second, every time I tried to make the lawyer the focus of the story, the enforcer fought me.  I fought back but he fought harder, and eventually I had to concede defeat.  His story was simply too powerful.

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Yvonne

I can’t remember a time, even as a child, when I haven’t been passionate about books and reading.
I began blogging, when I realised just how many other people out there shared my passion for the written word and I have been continually amazed at the wealth of books that are available and the amount of great new friends I have made, from literally 'The Four Corners Of The World'.

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6 comments
  • I looked back at your “beginnings” post and remember those lines – definitely ones that made me want to read on!

    I always enjoy entries like these, that give an in-depth look into the thoughts and ideas behind a story. It adds to a book getting to know the author a bit. This sounds like an exciting novel and I’m glad you’ll be reading it soon. I look forward to your final assessment.

    Thanks to you and the author for an interesting post!

    • Hi Kelly,

      I think this was such an interesting guest post from Ed on so many levels, both personally and with relevance to his writing career, particularly the explanation about the Pigeon-Blood Red Ruby.

      I have had quite a run on reading books written by lawyers turned authors, ably born out by comments Ed made in his post and biography, with the line …

      ” Every time I tried to make the lawyer the focus of the story, the enforcer fought me. I fought back but he fought harder, and eventually I had to concede defeat. His story was simply too powerful.”

      … Making me smile 🙂

      The whole tone of the article, is very professional and well-considered, so if the storyline and characters are portrayed in the same dynamic way, connecting with them will be a pleasure.

      Thanks for your kind words of encouragement, I hope you may be persuaded to find yourself a copy of ‘Pigeon-Blood Red’, if you continue to enjoy reading what others have to say about it 🙂

  • Great guest post. It is always interesting to hear about the author behind the work. It seems some stories and characters just need to be written.
    Happy weekend Yvonne and happy reading 🙂

    • Hi Naida,

      In the lawyer come author written book I am reading right now ‘The Victim’ by Eric Matheny (which is excellent by the way), the lawyer is very much centre stage of the storyline, as the case involves him personally.

      This is very much contrary to the lawyer in Ed’s story, who be his own admission, takes second place to the underworld enforcer.

      As I am reading the books back to back, I shall be very interested in comparing the two lawyer character developments closely.

      I love the fact that Ed came through with such an excellent and well considered guest post, it made collating the finished piece, such a joy to do 🙂

      Thanks for stopping by and I hope that all is well with you 🙂

  • Fascinating post. Its always good to hear about the person behind the books.

    As you know I’m loathe to begin any more books that form a series but there is an exception to every rule and I think this trilogy may well be an exception.

    • Hi Tracy,

      ‘Pigeon-Blood Red’ is next up on my list of books to read, so although, like yourself, I am trying not to become embroiled in a series, perhaps this one will work for me if I can stay ahead of the game? If not, I am now hoping that each installment of the series will work as a stand alone story and thus have a definitive ending, so that I don’t need to read another two episodes, to discover the end game!

      It must have been quite frustrating for a lawyer / author to try and make his fictional lawyer the centre of the action, only to be thwarted at every attempt, by his own characters and storyline!

      Thanks for taking the time to read, what was for me, an interesting post to put together 🙂

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